It seems the only way you can describe a smell, is by referencing another smell.
New mown grass. Beer. Bread. Rotten eggs. Those seem to be a few of the "primary" smells you use to describe others smells.I know. Sounds funhouse mirror weird.
But take this magnolia, for example.
If you've ever smelled one, or floated one in water with a candle, you might describe it as a lemony honeyed aroma. It smells like heaven.
The gardenias-- wow. Thick seductive sweet vanilla-ey.
I remember reading Mary Karr's memoir-- the first one-- and the way she described the smell of the factory town, paper factory probably:
it " smelled like a wicked fart. "
I got that.
From Richard Price: "A greasy aroma drifted down from the third-floor food court — spare ribs and Cinnabons..."
Okay, from one of my own--SECRET KEEPERS. Emma and her grandson:
Emma stepped beside Kyle and breathed in the scent of his neck--soap, a little sweat, a whiff of smoke and something else, something boyish and budding, tickly as pollen. He smelled delicious.
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